2012년 1월 12일 목요일

Chain Writing; the witch

Once upon a time, there was a witch. She looked so ugly, and she was very evil, so many people in town didn't like her. One  day, she went to the forest. She found a pond. She was going to drink the water. from the pond, but when she bent herself forward, she saw herself mirrored in the pond. The witch thought it was very ugly, so she decided to go to plastic surgery clinic to lift her face. Soon, her face became the prettiest in the world.She became popular all over the world. Everybody thought that she was really beautiful. However, as you know.some people dislike someone who uses plastic surgery, so the picture of the witch's face spread into the internet, and many nasty comments were under the picture. There were many people who disliked it, but there were also some who liked it. Suddenly, this became an issue for most people. The world was dividedby people who like the picture, and people who did not. They were fighting seriously. Then one day, a person came who could end this fight. It was a person who had a Time Machine. He went into the Time Machine, and went back to time before the witch having a plastic surgery. A man said "Don't have a plastic surgery! If you don't listen to me you will ruin your life, and the world will fight because of you!" , and stopped the witch. Then the witch said, "But I don't want to live with this ugly face. I want to be pretty, too"  Then the man said, "If you stop being evil to the others, you will be pretty without a plastic surgery" So, the witch decided to help poor people, and be kind to the others, and amazingly, everyone loved her, and she started to think that outward appearance not very important, so she lived happily ever after.

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  1. Is this finished? I think I remember seeing more on the paper. The typing and grammar is pretty good.

    I hope you can get more writing up on your blog very soon. Try to put pictures in your posts. Some good writing, but I hope to see more get finished during class.

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